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Offline thebryn

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Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« on: November 01, 2011, 04:21:15 pm »
Had some of my most successful and engaging classes today. The work was hard but they loved it!

You will need:

1. A3 paper to create story boards. At the top goes the title 'Story making race' and beneath that the beginning of the story, for example:

    Story begins: You borrow a dusty old book from your best friend
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    Story begins: Bill Gates is flying his spaceship. He is approaching Mars when he sees something moving on the surface (*surface: 표면)

    The rest of the page is 5 boxes labelled one to five. (See attached)

2.  About 30 words cut out in 48 sized font. (see attached) Fold them all and put them in a container/envelope

3.  You will also need a set of coloured pens, preferably felt tips, your co-teacher should be able to find some (see note 1)


The lesson went like this:
We pushed the desks around to make 6 large tables. Then took the 6 most talented kids (your co-teacher can help or pick the smartest couple and they can help chose the rest) and sent the rest of the class to the back of the room. Sit one genius to each table and let them chose one peer to join them. This spreads out the I.Q to make sure each group will be able to participate and stops a genius being completely surrounded by idiots. You now have 12 people sat. Ask the rest to sit where ever they want (max 6 to a group is preferable). As they are sitting down bring up the online stop watch (see note 2), click countdown and enter 5 minutes. This will be the time they have for each evolution.

Then give out one pen to each group, letting the kids chose the colour (see note 3).

Now its time to ask your co-teacher to explain the lesson: One box to one group. 5 minute evolutions. At the start of each evolution the kids blindly pick a word from the envelope (see note 4) and need to continue the story using that word. At the end of 5 minutes the A3 story sheets will rotate clockwise, then they need to write the next part to that story and so on.

Remember to collect in the used words, put them back in the envelope and have them chose a new word each turn. By then end you should have 6 completed stories each with the provided introduction and 5 parts

Present the completed stories to the class. It turned out best to have the co-teacher read and translate the stories to them so that they understood (See note 5). The presentation is often fun and shows how the story ran its course. Although we only had time to read two or three stories before the bell the kids would often stay a few more minutes and hear the rest! Yay!


After a couple of lessons we discovered..
1. When the stories rotate, have a member of the previous group explain what has happened in the story so far. This saves time.

2. Its best not to give out a word on the 5th and final evolution, just let them round the story off somehow.


Have fun with this lesson an tell me how it worked out, and please edit or improve it if you can  :D



Note 1: Using colour felt tips helps the stories look nice but also it helps each group identify how they contributed to the story at the end by their individual colour

Note 2: The online stopwatch (http://www.online-stopwatch.com/large-stopwatch/) is a fantastic teaching tool. Not only does it clearly show kids how long that have to do a set task its also my best disciplining tool. Tell your rowdiest classes than this stopwatch represents how long the lesson will continue into their brake time, then start the stopwatch. It's entertaining to see the loudest kids as they mentally battle between wanting to continue talking and not wanting to stay after class. Only stop the stopwatch when they are all sat down and there is complete silence. Any mumblings just let it run, and when you stop it wait a few seconds, if they begin talking just start it again. They get the picture pretty quickly. I've never reached 2 minutes.

When the class ends its imperative that you stick to your guns. Even if the class has only run up 14 seconds, click 'back', click countdown, enter 14 seconds, set and start the countdown. The great thing about this system is that you don't have to shout, the kids will shout at their peers to be quite. Just start the stopwatch, sit back and wait.

Note 3: You will be surprised how this effects performance   http://www.ted.com/talks/lang/eng/sheena_iyengar_on_the_art_of_choosing.html

Note 4: The extra words were to help give the kids some direction. Just left to their own devices they may have struggled with ideas of how to continue the story. Unfortunately it can also hinder if they pick a completely unrelated word. But this can lead to some of the more interesting ... plot twists?

Note 5: We are lucky in that we have a desk camera rigged into the computer. We place the finished stories on my desk and they are shown on the big screen. This way my co-teacher can translate them, the kids can follow the written English and I can edit any grammar or spelling mistakes as we find them.
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Offline tgisms

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #1 on: November 01, 2011, 08:46:51 pm »
hopefully it works well!!!!

thanks a lot :)

Offline lennonloverlady

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #2 on: November 02, 2011, 09:17:34 am »
Thank you! I am very excited to use this in my after school class! You really put thought into this lesson and I really appreciate your thorough instructions!

P.s. TED.com Rocks!

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #3 on: November 02, 2011, 09:24:14 am »
This looks great, I'm going to try this with my Grade 3s soon now that I've finished the book.
Great work, thanks!

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #4 on: November 02, 2011, 10:50:59 am »
Just did this lesson with my two low level MS classes - it worked great!

The Grade 3 students worked well together and each story had ridiculous, crazy twists.

I'm thinking of using this with some of my low level high school classes too, well done :)

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #5 on: November 02, 2011, 10:57:02 am »
I am 100% using this!  I have been trying to figure out a way to make this work in a class for a long time!

Woohoo!  I am using the video from the Youtube tipped ad to show how changing one word can change the whole story http://www.youtube.com/user/tippexperience as an intro

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #6 on: November 02, 2011, 11:13:21 am »
I am going to try thins after the final exam. It would be great.

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #7 on: November 02, 2011, 12:34:42 pm »
What is A3 Paper? (is that a stupid question?) Can I find it at the stationary store?

This lesson was very thought out and well planned. Don't think I could pass this in my normal classes - but will use it for after school!

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #8 on: November 02, 2011, 02:06:55 pm »
Stamerjam: A3 paper is twice the size of A4 (Have a look at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paper_size). Its just bigger and gives them more creative space. Ask your co teacher if she can print in A3 or photocopy A4 pages into A3 :)

Margeaux: Nice move with the video. Getting a quick video as an attention grabber at the start or mini break part way through a lesson is always a good idea. Just remember your pressed for time as it is! Good luck :D

Lennon lover: TED.com does indeed rock. Anyone reading this don't hesitate, just type TED into your brower bar. Please!
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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #9 on: November 03, 2011, 04:08:18 pm »
Just finished an after school class using this. I got 6 of the most bizarre stories I have ever read, my kids imaginations are weeeeeird!

We had zombie situations, decapitations, I got married to a gay man, a skunk burnt off a mans nose, a Pororo bondage situation, I became drunk and ate a box of chocopies - all round craziness!!

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #10 on: November 03, 2011, 09:50:29 pm »
Circle stories are great.

Also, I have students write small roleplays based on the topics and vocab discussed in the chapter they are studying.

I'm going to have a 'Make a Scene' camp this year.  Tired of pirates and Harry Potter?  Give them 4-5 pics and they have to put them into a sequence. 

Comic grids are fantastic.  Acting out roleplays that they've written from topics they've selected from a hat would be another idea.

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #11 on: November 04, 2011, 10:12:29 am »
Thank you :) I'm going to try this out with my after school class. If all goes well, I'll use it for my advanced grade 3!

UPDATE: I tried this with my after school class, and it went well! I picked leaders and everything! Even the lower level students went through giggle fits. I only used two stories, and they all involved a lot of things dying. But they learned new words and sentence structures, and had some fun.
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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #12 on: November 04, 2011, 01:23:22 pm »
Another thing I'll do for my camp which can work in a regular class setting is 'timelines'  in which they can input events on a timeline depending on when it too place.  E.g. Age 7 - 'I lost my first tooth', Age 1.5 'I walked for the first time', etc.

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #13 on: November 04, 2011, 02:20:12 pm »
After school class is a great place to try ideas. I test most of the new ideas on them and if it works, then use it for the rest of Grade 3.

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #14 on: November 07, 2011, 04:50:12 pm »
All nice ideas guys. Keep them coming :)
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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #15 on: November 17, 2011, 10:16:58 am »
I used the story writing lesson this week and it was a great success so thanks for the idea.

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #16 on: November 17, 2011, 01:15:21 pm »
 ;) ;) ;)I think it is very excellent

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #17 on: November 18, 2011, 11:41:06 am »
Thanks for the idea! Next week about half my classes are disrupted by speaking and listening tests so I don't think it's worth doing a texbook lesson. Will be using this for the random few classes that aren't cancelled - looks good!

And to the poster who asked about A3 paper - my school doesn't have that size either and so I'm going to use B4 instead. Do you have that size?

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #18 on: November 18, 2011, 02:24:19 pm »
This was such a great idea!  It worked perfectly as a filler lesson the past week or so, especially for the 3rd graders who have already finished their final exams and have very little incentive to do textbook work in class.  Some of the stories they came up with were absolutely hilarious!  I work in an all-boys middle school, though, and I had to closely monitor to the progression of the stories to make sure they stayed (*ahem*) appropriate, if you know what I mean, lol.  Thanks for posting your idea!!

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Re: Story writing: my most successful class in 6 months
« Reply #19 on: November 20, 2011, 05:09:01 pm »
Great Idea ...I may try this!